Susan Storm: Captured

Susan Storm: Captured

The Invisible Woman, taken

Chapter 1 by CQuincy CQuincy

The conflict raged on in the swirling chaos of the Negative Zone, colors flashing and energies sizzling as the Fantastic Four faced off against Blastaar’s formidable forces. Susan Storm Richards, the Invisible Woman, moved gracefully through the fray, her powers forming a protective, unseen veil around her.

In the heat of battle, Sue’s ravishing figure stood as a striking silhouette against the vibrant twilight of the Zone, her sleek, skintight costume hugging every inch of her flawless, voluptuous form. The suit, woven of unstable molecules, shimmered under the kaleidoscopic light and clung to her like a second skin, showcasing the come-hither curve of her hips, the tantalizing taper of her waist, and the full, inviting swell of her perfect, perky breasts as they rose and fell with each ragged breath escaping her soft, full lips.

Her golden hair flowed like silk, cascading over her shoulders and framing her radiant face, which glowed with fierce determination as she directed her invisible shields to deflect the energy blasts raining down on her family.

“Johnny! Watch your left!” she called out, spotting an incoming wave of Blastaar's minions. The Human Torch spun around just in time, igniting a firestorm that sent the attackers scrambling.

“Thanks, sis!” Johnny replied, his eyes blazing. “But we need to take the fight to him!”

Meanwhile, Reed and Ben grappled with Blastaar, the towering alien warlord. “You think your pathetic powers can challenge me?” he boomed, unleashing a torrent of energy that sent them reeling.

Just as Sue was about to launch an attack, a sudden shift in the air caught her attention. A rift in reality opened nearby, pulsing with dark energy. Before she could react, Blastaar’s eyes locked onto her, a wicked grin spreading across his face.

“Ah, the elusive Invisible Woman. Now is the time for my true prize!” he bellowed, extending his arm toward her. A wave of energy surged from him, ensnaring Sue in its grip. In an instant, she was yanked through the dimensional veil, the world around her distorting as she tumbled inside the void.

Disoriented, Sue emerged in a grand throne room, the heart of Blastaar's castle on his home planet of Baluur. The dark, palatial chamber was filled with exotic scents and strange, pulsating crystals, illuminating the hall with a ghostly glow. Sue’s eyes fell on the cadre of palace guards positioned along the walls, their massive spears crackling with energy. The air around them felt heavy with an unspoken threat, a reminder of the awesome power at Blastaar’s disposal.

“Welcome to my realm, Susan Richards,” Blastaar suddenly whispered into her ear as she felt his hands tracing her curves. He ogled his prize as he slid his hands up her form, cupping her heaving tits through her uniform.

Sue screamed and stumbled forward, not realizing her captor was so close to her body. As she regained her footing and turned to face him, his voice rumbled once more.

“Resistance is futile, my dear,” he continued in a low, sultry growl. “Surrender to the pleasure I offer, and your every desire will be laid bare.”

“What have you done?” Sue demanded, her voice laced with defiance. “You can’t hold me here!”

Blastaar chuckled, a deep, menacing rumble that sent shivers down her spine.

“Oh, but my dear, you are already mine. Your powers, your beauty — they are now mine to possess. You will have a cherished place among my harem. Your power is intoxicating, and together, we can reshape this realm.”

Sue's heart pounded. “I’ll never be yours,” she yelled, channeling her energy to become invisible. But as she faded from view, Blastaar's eyes somehow remained locked on her, a smirk creeping across his face.

“You think you can hide from me?” he taunted, his voice echoing through the throne room.

With a swift motion, he raised his hands, summoning a surge of raw kinetic energy. The air crackled around him as he unleashed a powerful blast in her direction, sending a shockwave through the chamber. Caught off guard, Sue was thrown against the cold stone, her concentration shattered. The impact jolted her back into visibility, and she gasped as she regained her form, feeling the sting of the wall against her body. Before she could react, one of the towering guards lunged forward. In an instant, he clamped a power-dampening collar around her neck, the cold metal leaving goosebumps all over her soft skin.

Blastaar stepped closer, and Sue felt his triumphant, predatory gaze piercing through her uniform.

“You see, Susan? You can’t escape me. Every attempt you make to resist only brings you closer to belonging to me. Soon, you will learn to embrace what I can give you.”

Sue felt a chill run through her. She could sense the pull of his presence, the raw power radiating from him. Blastaar was clearly an alpha male, and a royal one at that: exasperatingly imperious, but regal, intense, commanding — even magnetic. It was a charisma she couldn’t ignore, a stark contrast to Reed’s reserved intellect. For a moment, she found herself oddly enticed; try as she might to deny it, she found such unapologetic bravado undeniably attractive in men like the Sub-Mariner and Doom. On many a night when Reed was stuck in his lab and she was alone in their bed, thinking about it left her breathless and yearning.

And just as it did whenever she thought of Namor and Victor, guilt crept in as her thoughts returned to Reed, her steadfast husband, who was fighting off hordes of Blastaar’s forces as she jawed with the alien warlord himself.

She re-centered herself. She couldn’t let any of this distract her now. She had to find a way back to her team and escape Blastaar’s grasp. “Your games won’t work on me,” she spat out in spite.

“Ah, but this is just the beginning, Susan Richards,” Blastaar replied, his voice smooth and dangerous. “You will come to realize that I can give you pleasures and power beyond your wildest dreams. And soon enough, you will be begging to stay.”

Sue steeled herself for the ordeal ahead. This wasn’t just a battle for her freedom — it was a battle for her very identity.

Where does Blastaar take Sue?

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